Persuasive Writing Speech

During term 3 we have been writing persuasive speeches. First, we chose what to write about, something you are very strong about and believe in most. My topic I was very passionate about was Factory farming must be banned. I used high modality words, facts that relate to each of my points, and different types of sentences to keep the audience listening.



What I could have done better next time:
Clearer voice so everyone can hear me.
Try not to trail off at the end of my sentences.
Stop fidgeting.

Short Reflection of ShortStreetLand Ad

For The Past three weeks, we have been recording, acting out, and perfecting our ads. First off we chose our groups, I was in a group with Tylar, Lucy, Kahi, Breagh, Emily. We decided to do a premier for a TV ad Shortstreetland - we got our inspiration from Shortland Street. Here is our official ad: 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SR7M3mx_jxA

What went well:

• I liked how we worked well as a team
• The camera skills were great, on the perfect angle.
• We used costumes and props that make sense to the ad
• It was most definitely dramatic as we expected
• I liked how we used different areas to suit the scene. 

What we could do better next time:

• Next time I think we could speed up the ad
• Next time ad our voices into the clip
• Make the ad make sense for people who have never seen the tv show, Shortland Street
• Next time use our time wisely
• We could make decisions as a team next time, not just the leader]

Thank your Miss J for letting us use the areas of the school.