Overall, I am really happy with my story and how it looks, and I also really enjoy this type of writing. I like this sort of writing because we can enjoy and have fun making the story but also reading it too. It's great to because this type of writing you can basically write anything you want to do, whether It's in space, in the classroom, or at home! I hope you enjoy reading my Pick-A-Path!
I really like you're story and I think you did a wonderful job. I like how you're story is not unrealistic and it contains things that can actually happen. The only thing you might need to fix is that one of the rules that the mum gave you was not to answer the phone but on one of the paths she rings you up. other than that I think you did a great job, keep it up!
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